Summary of "A FORMULA for Writing a DBQ"
Main ideas / lessons conveyed
- There isn’t a single “required” structure for a DBQ on the National Exam (no fixed number of paragraphs, and no required intro or conclusion).
- However, for students who want reliable guidance, the speaker offers a specific, flexible paragraph-writing formula designed to maximize points.
- The DBQ is about argumentation, not just description:
- You must use documents as evidence.
- You must analyze how the evidence supports your topic sentence and overall thesis.
What students should do to score well
- Use a thesis that creates categories that directly map to body paragraphs.
- Include a mix of document-based evidence and outside historical evidence.
- Aim for the Complexity Point by incorporating more documents (often all seven) and using the full formula.
DBQ structure guidance (what to include, in what order)
Overall essay structure (allowed but not required)
- No mandatory format such as:
- Required number of paragraphs
- Required intro paragraph
- Required conclusion paragraph
- “As many as you need” is the guideline.
The speaker’s recommended “formula” (paragraph-by-paragraph)
Paragraph 1: Contextualization + Thesis
- Start with 2–3 sentences of contextualization
- Must include specific historical information
- Must be relevant to the prompt
- Include a thesis statement in this paragraph
- The thesis must be:
- Historically defensible
- Formulated as an argument
- The thesis should establish categories (e.g., the speaker’s example categories: social, political, economic)
- The thesis must be:
- Body paragraph count should match thesis categories:
- If 3 categories → 3 body paragraphs
- If 2 categories → 2 body paragraphs
- The thesis serves as the road map—the essay should “stick to it.”
Body paragraphs: Repeat an evidence-and-analysis sequence
For each body paragraph, follow this pattern:
- Topic sentence
- Evidence (documents)
- Analysis (connect evidence back to the claim/topic/thesis)
This is summarized as: “spill the tea” = Topic sentence + Evidence + Analysis (He compares it to a common writing mnemonic, but clarifies it works for DBQs too.)
Body paragraph component checklist (repeat for each category)
- Topic sentence
- Summarize what the paragraph proves
- It should “steal” that category directly from the thesis
- Evidence sentence using documents
- Example approach:
- “Document X says…”
- (The speaker acknowledges teachers dislike this phrasing, but presents it as a practical method for struggling students.)
- “Document X says…”
- Must include:
- A brief description of what the document shows (not a quotation, per the speaker’s suggested method)
- Example approach:
- Analysis sentence(s)
- Must explicitly connect evidence to argument
- Include language like:
- “This shows…” or “This demonstrates…”
- Then explain how the evidence proves the paragraph’s topic sentence
- Emphasizes the difference between:
- Describing documents vs.
- Arguing with documents (required for full points)
Document quantity targets (for scoring)
- For strong document-based support:
- Include at least four documents across your analysis (speaker’s guideline for strong performance)
- For the Complexity Point:
- Consider using all seven documents
- (Speaker frames the Complexity Point as easier to earn by maximizing document use.)
Adding outside evidence (beyond documents)
- In addition to document evidence, you must include evidence not contained in the documents:
- Must be specific historical evidence
- Must be explained and analyzed like document evidence
- Speaker’s suggested method (placement can vary):
- “Source” one or more documents in particular paragraphs (e.g., source one document in paragraph 2, another in paragraph 3)
- Then add outside evidence with a second evidence sentence such as:
- “Another piece of evidence related to this event is…”
- After naming it, explain and analyze how it supports the argument.
Point-focused strategy
- If the student follows the provided formula:
- They can achieve 6/7 points (with the only possible missing point being the Complexity Point).
- The speaker’s recommended way to get the Complexity Point:
- Use the full formula and use all seven documents (or source four documents instead of two, depending on how you interpret document use in the formula described).
Speakers / sources featured
- Speaker: A 43-year-old bald male narrator who discusses Fortnite as an analogy and provides AP DBQ writing guidance.
- Sources featured in the video content: None explicitly named beyond “documents” referred to as Document(s) 4, 7, 14, 1, 2, 3, 5, 6, etc. (these are placeholders for DBQ document set items, not real-world cited sources).
- Program referenced (no full source details given): The speaker’s APSA Cram Course / “apsa crem course” (mentioned as linked below).
Category
Educational
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