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How to Create an Elevator Speech About Yourself - Elevator Speech Sample!
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Key takeaways
Core idea: Don’t “pitch”—build connection
- The speaker argues that people dislike rehearsed, “salesy” elevator pitches with heavy jargon because they feel inauthentic and damage rapport.
- The goal is to clearly convey, in a conversational way:
- What you do
- Who you do it for
- How you do it
- Why it matters
- Emphasis: people hire people they like, so clarity shouldn’t come at the cost of real human relationship-building.
Elevator pitch construction framework (repeatable formula)
“Write it first, wordsmith later” prompt (pre-work)
In a word document, write (no need to polish yet):
- What do I do?
- Who do I do it for?
- How do I do it?
- Why does it matter?
- Cool accomplishments / recognition / reasons you love your job
Structure enhancements (question-driven)
- Add a question at the front and the end of the pitch to:
- Engage the audience
- Provide context for the problem you solve
- Keep the interaction from feeling like a one-way sales pitch
- After drafting, the pitch should be:
- Said a few times
- Shortened and refined
- Kept conversational, not scripted
Example elevator pitches (templates you can adapt)
Example 1 — Head of Marketing (blockchain)
- Probing opener: “Are you familiar with blockchain technology?”
- Positioning: “I’m the head of marketing at [company]…”
- Proof metric: “We launched a free educational course that got 100,000 signups in one week.”
- Conversational close question: “How do you keep up with new technology?”
Example 2 — HR/Recruiting leadership (talent retention)
- Probing opener: “Have you heard about how the unemployment rate is low and tech companies are fighting over talent?”
- Positioning: “I was hired as the director of people… to make sure it’s a top-tier place to work…”
- Proof metric: “I launched a retention program this year that reduced attrition by 15%.”
- Conversational close question: “Do you have someone in my type of role…?”
Example 3 — Virtual assistant (work-life balance)
- Positioning as a simple value proposition: “I pick up all those little tasks so you can breathe and focus on what you do best.”
- No accomplishments included—relies on clarity + confident significance.
- Conversational close: “Have you been able to find the right work-life balance?”
Pitfalls to avoid (common failure modes)
- Too much jargon (e.g., “centralized B2B SaaS products in the cloud…”) → makes people lose the “map.”
- Self-describing fluff (e.g., “creative hard-working professional…”) → sounds indulgent and uninformative.
- Over-telling your whole life story → stay concise so they can understand you and want to inquire more.
- Treating it like a pitch monologue instead of a dialogue → “throw it over the fence,” then steer back to what matters to them.
Networking + job-search playbooks referenced
Framework #1: “60 seconds of value”
- Use when your goal is relationship-building through networking.
- Process described:
- Focus conversation on what matters to the other person
- Use the pitch framework to create a simple yet meaningful way to add value
- Claim: this speeds affinity dramatically and works regardless of seniority (CEO or entry-level).
Framework #2: “Value validation project” (job landing tactic)
- Use when your goal is getting a job at the person’s company.
- Process described:
- Shift conversation toward the target team’s biggest obstacle
- Go research it
- Later send ideas/findings to the person
- Positioning: particularly effective for competitive roles or when you lack experience.
Execution guidance & interview use
- Record yourself delivering your pitch, then evaluate it—or ask a coach/mentor for feedback.
- Don’t rely on friends/family feedback (they may be too polite and not understand professional context).
- In interviews, the pitch often shows up as “Tell me about yourself” and is described as make-or-break.
- A free worksheet is mentioned for honing that interview answer.
Key metrics / KPIs mentioned (examples only)
- 100,000 signups in one week (free educational course)
- 15% reduction in attrition (retention program)
Note: there are no explicit company-wide KPIs or targets beyond these illustrative outcomes.
Presenters / sources
- Presenter: The speaker/creator of the YouTube video (also described as working in HR and recruiting).