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18 Ways to Write Unique Magic Systems
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The video presents 18 techniques for designing unique magic systems for fantasy novels. It focuses on making magic feel novel and memorable, while also ensuring it serves the story by creating tension and driving character consequences.
It includes ideas such as:
- Tying magic to social rank (status, reputation, love/hate dynamics, even mind-reading for elites)
- Building magic around taste (sweet/sour/salty/bitter/savory and combinations that produce different effects)
- Restricting magic to specific places (e.g., a river grants future sight only there)
- Deriving magic from a core emotion (fear/disgust/joy to shape the reader’s experience)
- Requiring group coordination (e.g., synchronized dance movements affect power)
- Grounding power in seasons or cycles (e.g., full moon strongest; new moon weakest for suspense)
- Making magic unique through limitations (resource/time/location/legal restrictions; e.g., water can only be summoned while bleeding)
- Replacing modern technology functions with magic (e.g., “frost touches” as portable cooling)
- Manipulating and trading memories (black markets, memory collecting, heists)
- Using art-based magic (painting/sculpture/performance; artwork quality affects outcomes)
- Designing limited-use magic (fixed number of activations; tattoos vanish after use)
- “Work backwards from consequences” (e.g., magic poisoning sanity—magic must worsen the story)
- Ancestral-linked magic (power depends on reverence; ancestors can dull or reallocate power)
- Sacrificial magic (paying with vitality/memory/ethics; even degrading eyesight)
- Interpersonal transfers (zero-sum exchanges of attributes/virtues between people)
- Tying magic to natural phenomena (temperature, tides, rain, storms)
- Tying magic to astronomical alignments (eclipses, moon alignments enabling special abilities)
- Deriving magic from a niche personal hobby (e.g., pottery principles used for magic)
It concludes with the reminder that unique systems are only one part of writing—readers must also be hooked early.
Artistic techniques / creative processes shown
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Conceptual “specification” by theme
- Decide what magic is really about (status, taste, emotion, ancestry, sacrifice, etc.), then map powers to that core idea.
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Worldbuilding via constraints
- Increase uniqueness and stakes using hard limitations (time, location, resources, legality, irreversibility).
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Narrative design through mechanics
- Build the magic so it naturally generates:
- suspense (worst-season/climax timing)
- consequences (sanity damage, expended charges, irreversible uses)
- conflict (zero-sum transfers, taboo trading, ancestor “throttling”)
- Build the magic so it naturally generates:
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Analogical conversion (technology → magic)
- Take a real-world function (e.g., air conditioning) and translate it into an in-world magical analog with rules.
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System-building by “input/output logic”
- Define inputs (taste combinations, moon position, rituals, group synchronization, celestial alignments) and outputs (specific abilities/effects).
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Aesthetic-driven power systems
- Use the measurable quality/craft of an art form (painting/sculpture/stone-stacking patterns/performance) as a magical variable.
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Backwards planning
- Start from a story outcome (e.g., a character goes insane) and design rules that mechanically cause it.
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Novelty from personal obsession
- Convert personal interests/hobbies into specialized magical rules (e.g., pottery).
Steps / advice presented
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Relate magic to a story-relevant pillar
- Pick a driver (social status, emotion, ancestry, natural cycles, etc.) and let it govern abilities.
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Make it unique through restrictions
- Add meaningful limitations such as:
- time restrictions
- location restrictions
- dependence on a resource
- legal/social prohibition
- Add meaningful limitations such as:
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Ensure stakes and consequences
- Design costs like irrecoverable uses, mental/physical degradation, or zero-sum exchange.
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Work backwards from the narrative goal
- If you want a character to suffer a specific fate, make the magic system mechanically produce it.
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Check that the magic improves the story
- Ask: How does this system serve the plot, characters, or themes?
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Hook readers with presentation
- Don’t rely on uniqueness alone—present the system in a way that pulls readers in early.
Creators / contributors mentioned (at the end)
- Brandon Sanderson (cited for Yumi and the Nightmare Painter)
- David Fallon (cited for Runelord)
- Dante’s Inferno / “Milo’s Dr Faustus” and Faustus (referenced indirectly via Dr. Faustus / “selling his soul,” as mentioned in the subtitles)
- The video creator / narrator (self-referenced as having published three fantasy novels and a best-selling video game; name not provided in the subtitles)
- The creator’s coaching program (mentioned as a system where the contest winner receives coaching; person name not provided)
- (Their upcoming) “magic system contest video” participants (hundreds of writers; not individually named)
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