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How To Write Words That Make People Buy (Full Course)

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Educational

Main ideas / concepts / lessons

  • Course purpose & credibility

    • The speaker frames copywriting as a core skill behind major outcomes (bestselling book launch, Guinness record, large revenue, time/location freedom).
    • Positions the video/course as a comprehensive guide.
    • Mentions a free workbook with templates, exercises, and reflection questions mapped to the video.

  • What copywriting is

    • Defined as persuasive writing—and more basically as transferring information from one brain to another in the simplest way possible.
    • In an AI-enabled world, the advantage (“alpha”) shifts to distribution; copywriting/media is the front end of distribution.
    • Examples: blog posts, YouTube scripts, short scripts, emails, ads.
    • Presented as a universal life skill for any context requiring persuasion (investing, hiring, parenting, leadership, etc.).

Methodology: “Six Ps of copy thinking” (pre-writing framework)

The framework the speaker uses before drafting any copy:

People, Positioning, Promise, Proof, Priority, Process

1) People (who it’s for)

  • Goal: Identify the specific audience (“who is they?”).
  • Why: You can’t answer “why should they choose us” without knowing who “they” are.

Audience use-case examples (marathon training program):

  • Beginner fear: not finishing / being last → promise: finish first marathon
  • Busy professional fear: sticking with training plan → promise: fit a 60-hour work week
  • Over-40 fear: injury → promise: run marathon while staying healthy
  • Boston qualifier fear: missing time → promise: cross line by a lot
  • Returning-from-injury fear: re-injury → promise: run while staying healthy

Empathy map (favorite tool to define People)

  • Four areas:
    • Current (daily reality): what they do/see/hear/smell/feel
    • Future fears (worst ending): where they don’t want to end up
    • Current frustrations: daily annoyances/avoided realities
    • Future goals (heaven): the desired destination
  • Uses the platinum rule (empathy): treat people the way they want to be treated.

Research method to identify buyer language

  • Talk to customers and mine sales calls:
    • Download calls → upload to AI → transcribe → identify reasons they bought → reuse their phrasing in hooks/ads.
  • Core idea: repeat the prospect’s beliefs/desires so they subconsciously feel understood.
  • Principle stated: “The pain is the pitch.”

2) Positioning (why you vs. others)

  • Goal: Make your offer/product uniquely perceived in the customer’s mind.

Benefits of strong positioning

  • Increased brand recognition
  • Makes sales easier
  • Others can talk about you more easily (word-of-mouth “conditions”)

Story example: Claude Hopkins + Schlitz Beer

  • Schlitz was last because “pure” meant the same thing as competitors.
  • Hopkins investigated what “pure” actually meant (specific filtration processes, water wells, yeast cells).
  • Lesson: state facts/unique advantages others ignore; AI can’t easily uncover hidden strengths without human research.

3) Promise (what they get / who they become)

  • Goal: Define the outcome, not features.
  • Jobs-style reframing: promise is about what it enables for the user.

“So what” test

  • Structure example:
    • Deliverable detail → so what (benefit) → so what (deeper result) → so what (identity/outcome)

Warning

  • If you’re unclear, you lose—confusion breaks persuasion.

4) Proof (why you can be trusted)

  • Question: “Why should I trust you?”
  • Defines trust as: belief + evidence (faith without evidence).

Three types of proof

  1. Authority by association (e.g., “Elon Musk says…”, “Dr. So-and-so”)
  2. Your results (numbers/trajectory)
  3. Client stories/results (most important/strongest)

Proof matching principle

  • Proof should be relative to the avatar (age/identity/context), or it feels less relevant.

“Deaf and mute test” exercise

  • Imagine you cannot explain—only point.
  • You should be able to point to:
    • recognizable trust markers
    • quantifiable outcomes (numbers)
    • experience credibility (e.g., “400 clients, 11 years”)
  • Example idea: you can’t just point to “I’m a great copywriter,” but you can point to results like a $106M launch in 3 days.

5) Priority (why act now)

Two motivations for action

  • Move toward pleasure
  • Move away from pain (speaker prefers pain; people “sprint away from pain”)

Three ways to create priority

  1. Scarcity: limited spots
  2. Urgency: goes away in X days
  3. Cost of inaction (favorite)
    • Describe what happens if they stay on the current path
    • The logic: the gap creates deprivation, increasing motivation
    • Drowning metaphor: stronger deprivation → stronger urgency to act

6) Process (how it works)

  • Question: “How does your offer work?”
  • Multiple routes can reach the outcome (examples: GLP-1s, diet, Pilates, marathon training).

A good process does four things

  1. Explains why other solutions fail
  2. Creates a believable path
  3. Feels different
  4. Is easy to understand

Quick process discovery question Ask:

  1. What do most people believe?
  2. Why are they wrong?
  3. What do you believe instead?

Named example

  • “Value acceleration method”
    • Compile across industries
    • Identify limiting factors
    • Solve them rather than “more activity = more progress”

Applying the six Ps into ads (two examples)

Example 1: Alex Hormozi-style scaling workshop ad

  • People: business owners doing $1–$3M/year (or a specific bracket)
  • Positioning: teach what works in portfolio companies
  • Promise: learn 1–3 things to scale past current bottleneck level
  • Proof: portfolio generated $250M+ aggregate revenue (as stated)
  • Priority: if you don’t act, problems route to you; you end up with “a job not a business,” and workshops get booked out
  • Process: value acceleration method

Example 2: Shelby-style high-ticket sales master class (women-focused)

  • People: women new to marketed/business opportunity offers
  • Process: not a specific “value acceleration” model—uses the offer itself (high-ticket sales)
  • Promise: make more money without quitting job; remote/choose hours; work from anywhere; close expensive deals
  • CTA: register for a free live master class (time specified)

Methodology: “Five C’s” for writing on the internet

Real-world writing premise

  • School teaches long essays and “impressive” language.
  • Real writing should make the reader feel smart, not sound smart.
  • Audience assumed to be:
    • busy/distracted
    • below fifth-grade reading level
  • Core objective: clarity.

1) Clear

  • Rule: They can’t buy if they don’t understand.
  • Technique: remove unclear parts; start from the end and work backward.
  • “Firefighter test”
    • Unclear: rambling, vague, unsure
    • Clear: direct urgent instruction (“there’s a fire downstairs—open the window and jump out”)
  • Tool mentioned: Hemingway App (cut/rewrite suggestions + readability level)

2) Concise

  • Rule: no wasted words.
  • “Cost per word” mindset: each word costs $10—cut without losing quality/understanding.
  • Practice method: write tweets/threads
    • 280-character constraint forces concision
    • Twitter as an “idea playground” to test hooks/angles, then reuse in ads, YouTube points, short scripts

3) Concrete

  • Rule: make writing visualizable.
  • Replace vague claims (“we help business owners grow”) with specific outcomes (e.g., “from 14 leads/month to 70 leads/month”).
  • Use zoom-in detail for big abstract emotions.

4) Conversational

  • Rule: readable for the avatar; match how they actually talk.
  • Warns against corporate/robotic social posts.
  • Suggests varying phrasing by audience age/profession/language norms.

5) Cadence

  • Rule: write like music—vary sentence lengths to avoid monotony.
  • Two tests:
    1. Read aloud; fix stumbling/unclear parts
    2. Squint and check sentence shape—look for variety vs. flat monotone
  • Emphasizes: copy should be like a window (transparent, doesn’t draw attention to the writing itself).

Hooks, bodies, and CTAs (frameworks + formulas)

Hook formula

  • Virality = (Benefit time × Relevance time × Credibility) / Perceived effort
    • Benefit: why someone should care
    • Relevance: how applicable to the audience
    • Credibility: why they should listen
    • Perceived effort: how hard it is to read/implement
  • Example concept: Noah Kagan thread as credibility-heavy with high relevance and high perceived effort (low “access” available to him).

Body frameworks

  1. What → Why → How
    • What is the point?
    • Why should they care?
    • How do they implement it?
  2. But Therefore (storytelling tension/arcs)
    • Replace linear story with pivot:
    • “But” (problem/turn) → “Therefore” (consequence)

Call to actions (CTAs)

  • CTAs should drive a next step; not influencer-style.
  • CTA structure: Who → What → When → How
    • Who is it for?
    • What should they do?
    • By when?
    • How should they do it (link/button/register/process)?

Core CTA principle

  • “One CTA to one avatar to one offer.”

How to get better at copywriting (practice methodology)

  • Main secret (stated plainly):
    • Read great writing and write more.

Specific practice habits

  • Study books/courses/past ads
  • Listen to copywriting content (podcasts/YouTube)
  • Build a swipe file
  • Do copy work (hand-copy words to learn rhythm)
  • Write 10+ tweets per day for 6 months
  • Work at three copywriting agencies to learn/practice and observe operations

Emphasis: time/tedium and skill-building over shortcuts.

How copywriting makes money (business/funnel model)

Three-part funnel

  • Traffic → Conversion → Offer
    • Traffic: shorts/reels/YouTube scripts/paid ads
    • Conversion: email list/webinar/VSL landing pages
    • Offer: monetizable offer that ties to conversion

Service niches mentioned

  • Social media ghostwriting (shorts)
  • YouTube script writing
  • Paid ad copywriting
  • Email/VSL/webinar specialist work
  • Growth operator partnering with influencers (influencer provides traffic; operator builds backend)

Pricing strategy guidance

  • Encourage high ticket: richer clients pay better, are easier to work with, and understand value.

Two suggested starting niche ideas

  1. Tech/startups
    • Write launch videos and/or run ads
    • Performance-based percentage approach (example: percentage of what you “make you”)
  2. Info space
    • Write email sequences (example: upfront free work)
    • Take a revenue share (example range: 10–15% of generated revenue)

How to charge more

Create more value via:

  • Saving time
  • Making more money
  • Reducing risk

If people don’t say yes, check:

  1. Is it hard to say yes? (reduce time investment)
  2. Did you show how they’ll make money? (clarify the money path)
  3. Do they not believe you can do it? (increase proof/results)

Offer improvement vectors

  • Speed, risk, ease → used to craft “irresistible” offers.

How to get clients (step-by-step guidance)

For beginners/overwhelm

  • Study (courses, YouTube, podcasts, copy work)
  • Practice in public (document learning on Twitter/LinkedIn)
  • Work for an agency (practice + paid learning without hunting clients)
  • After agency: get first client by working for free as a case study until you have proof, then start charging

When you have no money/credibility

  • No shame in being new.
  • Show competence upfront:
    • Bring a Google Slides plan/pitch to sales calls
    • Do work up front and reduce friction
  • “Show two things” principle:
    1. You want the opportunity
    2. You can deliver the opportunity
  • Key question: “How can I make this a no-brainer for the other person?”

“Tag method” playbook for a high-paying job (T-A-G)

  • Source/credit: learned from Charlie Hoehn, director of special projects for Tim Ferriss.

  1. T = Target

    • Identify the person/company/job opportunity
    • Example: Noah Kagan seeking help growing his newsletter pre-book launch

  2. A = Audit

    • Deep research:
      • spend many hours researching their background/business
      • review old YouTube videos/podcasts
      • analyze newsletter end-to-end
      • assess list size, hosting platform, landing page, sign-up flow, welcome email
      • identify traffic sources and growth gaps (e.g., Twitter/LinkedIn room)
      • compare against what other creators do in the space

  3. G = Gift

    • Turn research into immediate value deliverables:
      • create a skimmable visual slide deck (example: 19 slides)
      • include ready-to-post content pieces (example: nine social posts)
    • Result: hired as head of content at age 17

Pitch deck emphasis

  • A pitch deck format helps recipients:
    • quickly view on phone
    • quickly judge competence
    • say yes because it reduces time/effort

Motivation / closing lessons

  • “Start messy, start imperfectly”—copywriting is a long game.
  • Learning persuasion is never wasted; it won’t make you poorer.
  • If discouraged, ask:
    1. Does giving up increase likelihood of getting what you want?
    2. What story do you want at the end: quit vs. persist and “win anyway.”
  • Encouragement: don’t quit; you can’t lose if you keep going.

Speakers / sources featured (as named in subtitles)

Speakers

  • Jay (speaker; referenced by name “Jay” in the transcript)
  • Sam Parr (source of inspiration; sold a media company)
  • Seth Godin (quoted about marketing/spreading ideas)
  • Claude Hopkins (historical copywriter mentioned)
  • Elon Musk (authority/example for proof)
  • Dr. Soandso (generic “Dr.” example for authority proof)
  • Alex Hormozi (named example)
  • Shelby Sap (named example)
  • Noah Kagan (named example; hook/tweet-thread example; target in tag method)
  • Gary Vaynerchuk / Gary Pvost (referenced in “Write Like Music” cadence example)
  • Charlie Hoehn (credited teacher of tag method)
  • Tim Ferriss (mentioned as Charlie’s prior association)

Tools/resources mentioned

  • Hemingway App (clarity/readability grading)
  • AI (used for transcribing/summarizing sales calls in the described process)

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