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KELAS 9 BAHASA INDONESIA BAB 1 DEMI KELUARGA - KOHESI DAN KOHERENSI PARAGRAF HAL. 22 - 26 KURMER

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Main ideas and lessons (Chapter 1: Cohesion & Coherence; Descriptive Text; Infographics)

1) What cohesion and coherence mean in descriptive text

  • Cohesion (kekohezifan): the integration of form—how sentences/parts of a paragraph are grammatically connected.
  • Coherence (korekeherensian): the integration of meaning—how sentences in a paragraph logically connect and support the main idea.

2) Cohesion: how it is formed

Cohesion can be created formally using cohesion markers/tools, such as:

  • Pronouns (e.g., he, they)
  • Demonstrative words (e.g., this, that)
  • Conjunctions/connectors between sentences
  • Repeated words (repetition of the same key terms)

Goal of cohesion in a paragraph A good paragraph has cohesion because:

  • sentences relate to each other through connecting words/tools
  • there is repetition or reference that links back to earlier sentences

3) What makes a paragraph coherent (coherence)

A paragraph is coherent when:

  • it has one main idea
  • all information supports the main idea
  • sentences are logically connected
  • later sentences refer to the meaning established earlier
  • there is repetition of meaning (not necessarily the same wording, but the same idea continues)

4) Examples: cohesion (and what it looks like)

Example with cohesive references

  • One example is a paragraph where the second sentence uses a referent like “that lesson” to link back to Indonesian/English in the first sentence.
  • Another example is using “they” to refer back to “father and mother.”
  • These links create cohesion (integration of form).

Example using repetition + connectors

  • A paragraph discusses “beef jerky” and repeats the key word multiple times.
  • It also uses conjunctions (e.g., even though) to connect ideas.
  • This results in cohesion, and the paragraph also aims to keep meaning coherent.

5) Examples: cohesion/coherence problems

Paragraph that lacks cohesion

  • The story shifts in a way that divides the paragraph into separate parts (e.g., a census task vs. a memory from elementary school) without clear unity.
  • It is said to be split according to two main ideas, weakening cohesion.

Paragraph that lacks coherence

  • Sentences jump between unrelated topics (Minangkabau lineage/customs, then women’s roles, then decision-making), causing the paragraph to feel disconnected in meaning.
  • The lesson: if sentences are “inharmonious,” they should be removed to improve coherence.

Infographics: conveying descriptions and types of families

1) Definition and purpose

  • Infographics are information conveyed in graphic form.
  • They typically combine:
    • text
    • images
    • attractive colors
  • Purpose: make descriptions concise, interesting, and easier to understand than text alone.

2) Activity: interpreting infographics about family structures

The infographic presents types of families, for example:

  • Families with father, mother, and children
    • Including variations like two children
  • Single-parent families
    • Only mother + children
    • Only father + children
  • Families where children come from:
    • same father or same mother
    • both father and mother
  • (More types “and so on” are mentioned in the lesson.)

3) Activity instructions (table/checklist task) — detailed steps

  • Activity 1 (from the lesson): observe an infographic
  • Answer questions such as:
    • What does your family structure look like?
    • Do you know people with different family structures?
    • What message does the infographic want to convey?
  • The main message: there are several types of family structure.

Then use a table:

  • Fill in a check mark in the column S if you agree
  • Fill in “TS” if you disagree

The table contains statements (at least five statements/rows are referenced). Students can provide reasons for each agreement/disagreement.

Example of how the teacher models filling the table (with reasons)

  • Statement 1 (Agree): multiple family structure models are shown.
  • Statement 2 (Agree): images are easy to understand (distinguish father/mother/child; boys/girls clothing differences).
  • Statement 3 (Agree): information is complete because text and pictures support each other.
  • Statement 4 (Disagree): not enough pictures with prominent colors/sizes (as claimed by the example).
  • Statement 5 (Disagree): pictures do not clearly show social status via physical characteristics/clothing (as described in the example).

Speakers / sources featured

  • Mother (speaker/teacher)
  • Children (group of learners responding/being addressed)
  • Mr. Fajar (example person in cohesion explanation)
  • Father and Mother (example roles used in cohesion explanation)
  • Friends / classmates / “my friends and I” (example group in the cohesion problem)

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