Video summary
3 tips for *easily* selecting data in a table - writing task 1 table chart
Main summary
Key takeaways
Main ideas / lessons
- Tables with trends are easier to write than tables without trends when you select only the right data.
- When describing a trend table, organize your writing by category importance:
- Report both years for important categories.
- For less important categories, report only the second year’s number.
- Group similar categories together in one place when you have multiple small/related items (to avoid too many long paragraphs).
- Use grammatical structures to clearly express change:
- “which + clause” (e.g., “…, which increased significantly to …”)
- “this number” (referring back to the specific quantity or idea)
- “with (an increase/decrease)” (often listing both numbers after it)
- “compared to” (explicitly comparing year A to year B)
- Be careful about subjects and what can/can’t change:
- You don’t say “a train increased” (a train doesn’t increase); you say “train travel increased” or “the average distance by train increased.”
- Use wording that matches meaning:
- “travel” can refer to the movement by a mode of transport, which can be measured (e.g., miles for train travel).
- In the overview paragraph, focus on the overall trend rather than listing everything:
- The total average distance traveled per person increased overall.
- It’s recommended not to include extra wording like “by all modes of transport” in that specific overview sentence to avoid confusion (it could be misread as every individual mode increasing).
- End structure of the essay:
- Introductory paragraph: restate what the table shows (topic + time period + location if given).
- Details paragraphs: group categories logically (increases first, then decreases).
- Overview paragraph: summarize the main trend and the key comparison.
Methodology / instruction list
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Identify the chart/table purpose
- Determine whether the table shows trends (changes over time).
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Choose which categories to report
- Important categories
- Report the values for both years.
- Example structure: mention the first-year value, then show the change to the second year.
- Less important categories
- Report only the second year value (don’t repeat both years).
- Important categories
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Decide how to group categories
- If you have multiple less important categories, group similar ones to report together.
- Don’t group numbers that imply opposite movement (e.g., one increased and another decreased), even if they are close numerically.
- If grouping is needed, group categories that share a writing purpose, such as both being among the smallest numbers in the second year.
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Write “details paragraphs” using clear change language
- For increases:
- Start by describing the categories that increased.
- Use correct subjects and measurement nouns:
- Prefer “train travel increased” over “trains increased.”
- When needed, focus on “average distance traveled per person by [mode]”.
- For decreases:
- Identify the most important decreasing category and report both years for it.
- For smaller decreasing categories, group them and report only the second year.
- For increases:
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Write an “overview paragraph”
- Prefer describing overview as the second paragraph (though last paragraph is acceptable).
- State the general overall trend (e.g., total average distance per person increased).
- Avoid potentially confusing phrasing like:
- “the average distance traveled per person by all modes of transport increased”
- Instead, write more clearly that the overall total average per person increased, since not every individual mode increased.
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Use specific grammatical patterns to show change
- “which increased/decreased … to …”
- Ensures clarity about what changed (the overall clause meaning).
- “this number had increased/decreased …”
- Use carefully: “this number” should refer to the full quantity described, not just part of a sentence.
- “with (an increase/decrease) from X to Y”
- Or list the two numbers after “with”.
- “… showed a decrease, with an average of X in second year, compared to Y in first year”
- Explicitly contrasts two years.
- “which increased/decreased … to …”
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Include a basic essay plan
- Introduction: describe what the table illustrates (location + timeframe + subject).
- Details: increasing categories, then decreasing categories.
- Overview: overall trend + key comparisons (e.g., cars most used).
Examples of key phrasing shown in the video
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Which increased:
- “…, which increased significantly to 6,475 miles in 2000.”
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This number increased:
- “By 2000, this number had increased significantly.”
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With an increase:
- “… with an increase from 3,199 miles per person in 1985 to 4,806 miles in 2000.”
- or “… with an average of 3,199 … and 4,806 …”
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Compared to:
- “… showed a substantial decrease … 274 miles in 2000, compared to 429 miles in 1985.”
Speakers / sources featured
- The video narrator / teacher (“So you guys requested… I’m going to share… Let me use this table…”).
- Two consulted native speakers (unnamed; referenced as “I consulted two native speakers” and “They both agree…”).